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Don't write "He loved her." Write, "He remembered she hated cilantro, so he picked it out of her pho before she even asked." Specific actions are more romantic than vague adjectives.

Romantic storylines sell the myth of destiny: that there is a perfect puzzle piece wandering the earth. This creates the "soulmate burnout" effect, where people abandon perfectly good relationships because they do not feel like a movie montage. Don't write "He loved her

Real love is not a meet-cute. It is choosing to do the dishes when you are tired. Don't write "He loved her." Write

Before you finish your draft, run your relationship arc through this diagnostic checklist: "He remembered she hated cilantro